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  1. How many TA’s and teachers would, if unaware that this was a passage by Hemingway, have a field day with their red pen on this passage alone? Commas galore, sentences that are too long and points not made quickly enough.

    Even if the structure was tolerated I think all too many in the ivory tower would dismiss the point as without merit.

    Thee earl of obvious
  2. Sometimes I try to understand passages by illustrating them with my own characters:

    A young man is living as an expatriate working for a Fortune 500 company in Vietnam while his wheel chair bound uncle back home reflects on the war.

    Deception must be perpetuated lest it die a death based on shame and humiliation. The words sacred, glorious and
    sacrifice are part of this perpetuation of deception. How else could we convince young men and women to give their lives over countless generations to causes that are all too often inconsequential to those who give the biggest sacrifice?

    I suppose the only thing worse is to denounce the sacrifice as in vain.

    Thee earl of obvious

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