I'm ON to you, Monday.

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The Whitening

White overalls. Oh yeah, babe.

Bleached overalls!

I’ve wanted a pair of white overalls forever, and I even got a pair a while back, by Carhartt. My problem, though, was that most white overalls are made for painters, and for some reason, the bib pocket on painters’ overalls is almost always that triangular shape, as opposed to the “traditional” style of bib pocket, which I prefer. Finding a pair like this has been mostly fruitless — they exist, and they occasionally show up on eBay, but they’re pretty rare and I’ve never seen a pair in my size. So I did the next logical thing: I took an older pair of blue ones that I owned already and bleached them. This is the result. Score!

Bleached overalls, take 2. I really like the way these turned out. #overalls #Dickies #bleacheddenim

By way of technique, I used a big 5-gallon bucket, filled it about two-thirds with water, and then added some bleach. I didn’t measure the bleach, but my concentration was no more than 1 part bleach to 3 parts water, and likely even less strong than that. I submerged the overalls, stirred them around a bit, and then left them in there a while. After an hour or so, I changed the water and repeated, and then waited another hour, whereupon I changed the water again. I think I went through four changes of water altogether, and the result is that almost all the blue is gone. There’s a tiny bit remaining, if you know to look for it, but functionally, these are white!

After the final removal from the bleach water, I rinsed them with the garden hose and wrung them out, and then I washed them twice. First trip through the washer I used no soap at all, so it was essentially two rinses, and then a full washing in cold water with soap. After that, an air drying on our line, and that was that.

Bleached overalls, detail. A tiny bit of blue remains, but overall, I'm happy. (Get it? Overall, I'm happy? Get it? Overall? 😂😂😂 I'll show myself out.) #overalls #Dickies #bleacheddenim

Working...always working #amwriting #overalls #Dickies #bleacheddenim


Not that I’m wearing overalls much in July, but fall will be here soon enough!

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Bad Joke Friday

Ack! Somehow this week got away from me and I almost forgot this. But it’s still Friday (where I live, anyway) which means I’m only quite late instead of missing entirely. So here’s a bad joke I saw on Facebook the other day:

What is Forrest Gump’s computer password?

1FORREST1

Ha!

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Something for Thursday: Percy Grainger

Yesterday I got in the car to drive home and switched to the classical station (because the sports guys were talking hockey, and I’ve had my fill of hockey talk for a while), and I switched to hear the very opening bars of Percy Grainger’s Lincolnshire Posy. This piece is about 15 minutes long, and my drive home is about ten, if traffic isn’t outrageous. The solution, therefore, was to take a slightly longer route home so I could hear the whole thing.

I’ve written about Grainger before in this space, but it turns out that yesterday was his birthday, so I’m going to honor him again right here! Grainger was a very creative, and even innovative composer; he was almost exactly a contemporary of Igor Stravinsky, and there are moments in his music which are every bit as “wild” as the great Russian modernist. Grainger’s music also looks back, though, at the same time it looks forward, because he was very deeply committed to English folk music. Thus, many of his most famous works are settings of English folk songs that he transcribed in his wanderings through England. He was also quite the wanderer: Born in Australia, educated at a conservatory in Germany, lived in England until 1914, and then moved to the United States where he lived out the rest of his long life. Grainger’s curiosity fills his music with a constant sense of discovery. You listen to him and even in the most “normal” of his works, you still never quite know where he’s going with things.

Here are a few pictures of Grainger’s scores and parts. Note his free use of time signatures, and note even more his instructions. Grainger didn’t mess around with the traditional Italian words like “crescendo” or “fortissimo” or “andante” or “non troppo”.

Here is Lincolnshire Posy. This work has never stopped sounding fresh in my ears. I think it’s because Grainger didn’t try to work the folk tunes he learned from regular people into standard time signatures and rhythms; he learned the songs he collected from people in all walks of life, and I’m sure that more than a few of them couldn’t carry a tune or a rhythm to save their life. Nevertheless, he strove to preserve that experience of folk song, so nothing sounds refined or fixed. This is the character of what you might hear when someone says, “Hey, there’s this song I heard and it kinda goes like this” and they start singing without any heed for actual rhythm or, sometimes, even the tune.


Here’s some more Grainger. Just an amazing composer.

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A few random thoughts on STAR WARS stuff

::  I am officially in SQUEEE!!! mode for The Force Awakens. That’s all about that.

::  How about Star Wars: Rogue One? I’m more intrigued by this than SQUEEE!. I’m not really sure that this is a story that needs telling, but it might be interesting. I’m more on the fence about the idea of a gritty war movie in the Star Wars universe. The gritty. shades-of-gray type of space opera war story has already been done to perhaps canonical effect in the Battlestar Galactica reboot series. As always, the proof will be in the doing.

::  The newest news this week (‘newest news’ is a really bad turn of phrase, but I’m going with it) is that the next “Anthology” movie (which is what they are collectively calling the stand-alone, non-episode Star Wars movies) is a Han Solo movie. I’m guessing that this will be something of an origin story, showing us the young Han. This will be interesting stuff, to be sure; it’s clear in the original movies that Han has quite a history, and we didn’t learn much of it at all. This could be very interesting, indeed.

The real issue with the Han Solo movie will be tone. It seems to me that this one might need to be the most purely fun movie of the coming flood of Star Wars movies. I hope that we don’t get a story that posits some kind of traumatic childhood for Han, or that postulates some other kind of massive tragedy in his youth that leads to him being the cynical pirate he is when we meet him in A New Hope. The thing is, he’s not all that cynical; it really doesn’t take much to get him to stick around long enough to bail Luke out at the Battle of Yavin. Han’s cynicism is more selfishness than the defeated fatalism of Captain Malcolm Reynolds of Firefly.

In fact, I wouldn’t mind not having much of an “origin” story at all. Why not just have an early adventure of Han’s? We don’t necessarily need to see Han meet Chewbacca, either. All those story beats are really obvious, aren’t they? Not that I wouldn’t be happy seeing them, but I think it would be a blast to have the movie open with Han and Chewie already together, already having adventures, and maybe — in the very first scene, maybe the very first shot — Han plays the hand at cards that wins him a new ship. Maybe he doesn’t like the new ship very much at first.

I hope there’s a lot of the Millennium Falcon in the Han Solo movie.

::  Oh, and one more thing? The Han Solo movie must be titled Star Wars: Never Tell Me The Odds. This is not negotiable, Disney and Lucasfilm!

I also have some thoughts on the current run of Star Wars comics, but those deserve their own post.

It’s a fun time to be a Star Wars fan, innit?

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A Random Wednesday Conversation Starter

Startin’ to get a little warm, innit? So recommend to me some cold summer dishes! Salads, fruit dishes, adult drinks, non-adult drinks, whatever!

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Openings

Hey! Want to read the opening paragraph of GhostCop? Here it is!

Opening graf if the WIP. I always struggle with openings. #amwriting

(You may need to click through to embiggen.)

I’ve written about eighteen dozen variants of this opening, which means that I’ll almost certainly change it again. Openings drive me crazy. There needs to be something there, something to “grab”, or so I’m told. Fact is, I don’t remember ever putting a book aside on the basis that the opening sentence or paragraph didn’t “grab” me. I always give books longer than that to start to work their magic on me. But a great opening is kind of magical, and when you can cast that spell that early in the proceedings, that’s something special. That’s why I always work hard on my openings, and why I’m almost always disappointed in how they turn out.

Anyway, opinions on this one?

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Yay! Stuff! Yay!

I wrote a new post at the Official Site updating everyone on where I stand with certain projects!

Cal needs help picking which caption goes with a photo better!

SamuraiFrog appreciates Maria from Sesame Street!

My favorite “Maria Moment” from Sesame Street, for obvious reasons!

Roger comments on country music albums!

John Scalzi thinks things about gay marriage!

Alton Brown surprises with both his favorite cut of steak AND his preferred method of cooking it (but I’ll try both)!

Lynn Sislo has a new catchphrase!

Finally, what better way to spend July 4 than a Major League Baseball game followed by fireworks? At least, that’s what people thought in 1985 when they went to see the Braves play the Mets. The fireworks took place at 4:00 am, after the game took 19 innings and saw 29 runs scored off 46 hits.

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A Dispatch from the Hinterlands

Lots of red pen use on this one.... #editing #amwriting #overalls

Hey, everybody! Yes, it’s been a long time without a posting in this space. But not without cause! Here’s what’s going on!

1. I finished my second round of edits on The Wisdomfold Path (The Song of Forgotten Stars, Book II), and I am now having the book proofread. Progress is moving along nicely toward the book’s November 10, 2015 release date. And I cannot wait to see how readers respond to the continuation of the adventures of our Princesses (and their navigator) In SPACE!!!

2. Meanwhile, I am finally working again on a project that has been on the back burner for far too long: my supernatural thriller GhostCop (not the actual title), whose first draft I completed in November 2013, and which I have not touched since. Why did it fall off the radar? Mainly because of ongoing work on the Forgotten Stars series. Lots of 2014 was taken up by prepping Stardancer for release, and then I had to get the first draft of Forgotten Stars III: The Search for Spock (not the actual title) done. This was followed by the edits on Wisdomfold Path, because that series is top priority up until Book III’s November 2016 release date. I simply wasn’t able to find time until now to get back to work on GhostCop. But now I am.

And really, I’m not sure that I regret the long layover here. I am a firm believer in waiting a chunk of time — several months, at the very very least — between passes through a draft of a book. It can be less time than that when you’re proofing and gearing up for publication, but I firmly believe that a first draft should not be even looked at until a hard minimum of three months has passed. Distance helps make the parts of the book that aren’t very good stand out, and the longer it’s been, I find the less prone I am to seeing what I meant in the book and seeing what I actually wrote. In some cases, I can’t even remember what I meant, and when that’s the case, that means it’s time to cut. The result was that the manuscript ended up with a lot of red ink.

I enjoy this part of the process. #editing #amwriting #redpen

That’s not a bad thing! The book will be better for it, actually. I totally believe this. Every time I see a writer friend online saying that they’ve just finished a draft and are going to start editing immediately, I scream, “NOOOOOO!“, and throw myself across the room in slow-motion at them, as if I’m trying to knock the poisoned wine cup from their hands before they sip. (Yes, it’s dramatic. Sue me.) But really, the longer a first draft sits, the better.

As I worked through this one, I found passages I had no memory of writing, and I found other passages that seem to contain possible seeds for sequels. This excites me greatly, as GhostCop is intended to be the first book in a series. Unlike The Song of Forgotten Stars, this series will be intended as open-ended, and I’m hoping to work on a first draft to a second book sometime this coming fall or winter.

(Also, I’m not actually being coy about referring to this book as GhostCop. I literally do not have a title for it yet. I tend to just wait for titles to show up. One always does, so why worry about it? And if you’re wondering, I’m looking at sometime next summer for a release on GhostCop, so there’s that. It’s significantly shorter than the Forgotten Stars books, too, with a more ‘hard-boiled’ prose style.)

3. Finally, I’ll have more details as I get going, but I’m planning on releasing Stardancer on Smashwords sometime in late August, which means that it will be available for more formats. This also means that it will no longer be a Kindle exclusive title, and I will be removing it from Kindle Unlimited on August 15, when its current Kindle Select term ends. If you’re reading it via KU, make sure you finish by that date. (Although I’m actually not sure how that works, come to think of it — do KU books vanish from Kindles when their terms end? Hmmmmm.)

So that’s where we stand currently on things. So much time! So little to do! (Wait…scratch that, reverse it.)

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Two Hundred Thirty Nine

Happy birthday, America!

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