Saturday Centus

I pretty straightforward prompt this week…let’s see what we can tease out of it.

She crossed her arms. “Gimme a compliment, or I’m outta here.”

“OK…uhhh…OK, here. Without you around, I sleep like a baby.”

She grabbed her purse. “Nice try.”

“No, wait! Ever hear a baby sleep? They wake up crying every ten minutes, and they only sleep until they get held. That’s what I’m like. I can’t sleep unless I know you’re there to hold me.”

She looked at him, eyes narrowed. Then she put down her purse.

“OK, fine. You got me for one more night.”

“Should I turn down the sheets?”

“Let’s not push it.”


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8 Responses to Saturday Centus

  1. Michelle aka Naila Moon says:

    ha ha ha-very nice and smooth talking!

  2. Bethe77 says:

    Very smooth and creative.

  3. Bethe77 says:

    Very smooth indeed.
    Nicely done and very creative.

  4. LLM Calling says:

    brilliant, I love how you turned that around

  5. Judie says:

    This sounds sooooo familiar! Good take on the prompt!!

  6. Bo says:

    I really liked this! Very nice.

  7. Viki says:

    Oh what a sneak, lol. Loved this.

  8. Jenny says:


    I'm laughing so hard at this!

    I love the way you think!

    I love the way you write!

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